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Opening the Door

August 31, 2016 by Elaine

I opened the door.

I let you in.

At first it was just barely ajar, when I saw your smile.

You showed your true self to me, over and over.

I couldn’t believe it.

I wanted to open the door wider.

I wanted to have you close.

But then I closed it back a bit

Too soon for us both.

But you kept gently knocking.

In rhythm with my heart.

So I opened it all the way.

And here we are.

 

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Linking up with Mama Kat – the prompt was write a blog post in exactly 13 lines. 

Filed Under: Life, poetry, writing

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Comments

  1. Greta Funk says

    September 1, 2016 at 10:27 am

    <3

  2. Kat says

    September 1, 2016 at 11:27 am

    Love, love, love. 🙂

  3. Kim says

    September 1, 2016 at 9:06 pm

    Lovely poem…and glad you opened your door, and your heart.

  4. Kristin Shaw says

    September 1, 2016 at 10:04 pm

    YES. I love you.

  5. carol says

    September 2, 2016 at 2:08 pm

    Beautiful poem!

  6. Krystyn @ Really, Are You Serious? says

    September 2, 2016 at 3:27 pm

    I need more than 13 lines…in suspense here.

  7. Kat says

    September 6, 2016 at 1:47 am

    OPEN THE DOOR OPEN THE DOOR!!! I love this!

  8. Leslie says

    September 16, 2016 at 7:18 am

    Elaine this is so beautifully written. Not to mention you have me chomping at the bit with anticipation. Happy Friday!
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Hi! I'm Elaine, a transplanted Texan who has spent almost 16 years living in Cajun country. I am re-married to Brandon and we have five "kids" together, ages 21, 18, 17, 16 and 15 and crazy but cute dog, Charlie. I am also an office manager, occasional writer, prayer, and lover of life! Find me on Instagram (misselaine0375) and contact me at misselaineous0375 (at) gmail (dot) com.

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